F r e e ~ Chapter Three
Posted on: Nov 21, 2020
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The girl tried to walk her bike on the curb, but failed, so she tried again, but once again, it fell off, so she gave up the idea compeatly.
That was an example XD
Don't start too many sentences with Then or But . You can switch But with However. You can also start a sentence like this:
Running down the hill, the boy....
makes it interesting.
Well, hope that helped!
oh, and congrats on 500!! :DDD
yah it does
Take me with you! @.@
Earth sounds kinda cool. Maybe one day, I'll visit :D