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F r e e ~ Chapter One

Posted on: Oct 24, 2020
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M o R e

*whispers*

helo

how r u
?

*normal*

Ok let's get to it.

Welcome...er...here is my book F r e e! It's about a race of Kels, who are supposed to be perfect, but Raylen isn't! Aeehh

K e l

Kels are almost like humans, but different.
what's different is this:

-They hab pointy fEet
-They are eLeGaNt
-They aLwAyS have light hair
-They wear dresses 24/7
-They are pretty much pErFeCt
-Dey have light pale skin
-They are clean and in a way smooth!

Raylen on the other hand...is not xD

Also, member my last book? Quit it. Anyone wanna continue it? Mebe? No? Yes? Eh

Story in Comments! Don't comment yet or I will block you >:D

Also I prolly will not finish today :''(

~Hqney
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Comments: 28

ucantfindme
TheSaddendOne
To transfer it to skindex?
im confusedddddd
ucantfindme
TheSaddendOne
Do you want to help me do some of the writing?
sure how?
TheSaddendOne
TheSaddendOne
Do you want to help me do some of the writing?
To transfer it to skindex?
TheSaddendOne
ucantfindme
thank you! I am sure you are good too.

proly...
Do you want to help me do some of the writing?
stxrrymxxn
continued
also adds to the plot maybe Raylen has to later on help Mary regain her hOnOr *laughs in Zuko*). But at this point, the organized Mary seems better than the less-than-perfect, different Raylen.

Anyways, keep writing, I cant wait to see where this goes!!
stxrrymxxn
I like the idea, and your writing!! (lol, if I get bored enough, I might try something like this *shrugs*)

One tip: To me, it seems like Raylen becoming queen is a bit forced/rushed. To me, it seems like her sister would be a better candidate, even though she is somewhat mean shes older, shes already the expected first choice, and shes kind of a leader in my eyes. There should be more reasoning for why Raylen is queen maybe Mary does something shameful (which CONT. IN NEXT COMMENT!
ucantfindme
TheSaddendOne
I would never be able to write something as good as this on the skindex. And I never will, because I'm writing a book in Samsung notes. I dont actually intend on publishing this, because I'm not proud of my skills.
thank you! I am sure you are good too.

proly...
TheSaddendOne
I would never be able to write something as good as this on the skindex. And I never will, because I'm writing a book in Samsung notes. I dont actually intend on publishing this, because I'm not proud of my skills.
WildChick7002
ucantfindme
.0. TYSM!! <3 <3 mebe i over acted a little <3 but THX!
np! and it really is the best one ever :)
ucantfindme
WildChick7002
its honestly the best skindex story ever! i love this one so much XD
.0. TYSM!! <3 <3 mebe i over acted a little <3 but THX!