+ The Odd Jem (Chapter 1) +

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This is my first story written on this account, but I started writing it last year. Please give me tips, as I am new to creative writing!

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I was going to visit some crazy old aunt who I barely knew existed, who wrote with a quill, and wanted to send me to a summer school in the middle of nowhere! I tried to talk my dad out of it, because my mom, (after seeing there wasnt anything on her agenda for the next three months), had her mind made up and insisted we had to visit her step-sister.
As usual, he agreed with her, so I was stuck packing my bags and hoping we would be there for less than a week, but just in case, I made sure to have enough clothes for a month. It felt like I never got my way. Long story short, now I was in Iowa, one state away from an aunt who sent me a neon envelope on summer break.
Well, it didnt matter to me if they had made plans, because I had. I had it in my mind that my friends and I would have sleepover after sleepover, gossip, and eat so much candy that we wouldn't be able to move. I also had my own secret plan to talk to this boy everyone thought was cute. But now none of that would be done. And the worst part?
I was going to visit some crazy old aunt who I barely knew existed, who wrote with a quill, and wanted to send me to a summer school in the middle of nowhere! I tried to talk my dad out of it, because my mom, (after seeing there wasnt anything on her agenda for the next three months), had her mind made up and insisted we had to visit her step-sister.
The last sentence was crossed out, which was odd because I could still see the thing she had written, and she hadnt even tried to erase it. When I showed the odd note to my mom, she smiled, almost forcibly, and explained that Aunt Jem couldnt erase it because she used a quill and ink. Talk about old fashioned! Mom said her and my dad needed to look at their schedule and make sure, but it seemed like a good way to spend the summer, and I had never been to the Nebraskin prairie.
Well, it didnt matter to me if they had made plans, because I had. I had it in my mind that my friends and I would have sleepover after sleepover, gossip, and eat so much candy that we wouldn't be able to move. I also had my own secret plan to talk to this boy everyone thought was cute. But now none of that would be done. And the worst part?
''There is a really nice summer school down here where you could meet lots of nice girls your age and that would give you an excuse to see me every once in a while! I look forward to seeing you, Auntie Jem''
The last sentence was crossed out, which was odd because I could still see the thing she had written, and she hadnt even tried to erase it. When I showed the odd note to my mom, she smiled, almost forcibly, and explained that Aunt Jem couldnt erase it because she used a quill and ink. Talk about old fashioned! Mom said her and my dad needed to look at their schedule and make sure, but it seemed like a good way to spend the summer, and I had never been to the Nebraskin prairie.
''Dear Ava, I always send you birthday cards, and your parents tell me all about you in the winter when they come to visit, but I have never actually met you. Since your summer break should be starting soon, I thought the yearly trip your parents take down here could happen earlier this year, and you could accompany them! I know this is very out of the blue but I hope you havent made any plans.''
''There is a really nice summer school down here where you could meet lots of nice girls your age and that would give you an excuse to see me every once in a while! I look forward to seeing you, Auntie Jem''
What seemed like what would be a happy day took a turn for the worse when I opened the colorful envelope to see a handwritten note on a regular piece of notebook paper, wrinkled in the left hand corner of the page accompanied by what appeared to be a coffee stain. I could remember its curly calligraphy handwriting, and every word that my aunt had written. Dear Ava, it had started.
''Dear Ava, I always send you birthday cards, and your parents tell me all about you in the winter when they come to visit, but I have never actually met you. Since your summer break should be starting soon, I thought the yearly trip your parents take down here could happen earlier this year, and you could accompany them! I know this is very out of the blue but I hope you havent made any plans.''