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Read Please 2

Posted on: Sep 06, 2015
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This is not a series or anything cx I just need to test stuff, so im just... using the same names. In the comments
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Comments: 10

chickie128
SarahDiamond
The short sentences are suppose to be like that. Thats also just how I write. Short. Simple and sweet.
ok :P
pink2pickle
I'm Lovin it :D

What if you named the girl/Boy Scarlet. Sounds like a assassins name
SarahDiamond
Valkyrien
I think your descriptions are very good; I agree with Violet as far as the periods/sentence structure goes, but apart from that it is very nice!
The short sentences are suppose to be like that. Thats also just how I write. Short. Simple and sweet.
Valkyrien
I think your descriptions are very good; I agree with Violet as far as the periods/sentence structure goes, but apart from that it is very nice!
VioletReMakes
Very nice very intriguing but sorry for being a grammar **** but you should use a little less periods and just make the sentences longer it was bothering me sorry xD
SarahDiamond
Kinda weird. Please, mean comments will be deleted. And.. Yeah. I just wanna know what you all think. This helps me make Oc's and it gives me ideas for many other things that are soon to come c:
SarahDiamond
SarahDiamond
You slowly take out your dagger and hold it close to your chest.
You can feel your heart pounding. One of the soldiers suddenly gets up and walks the other way down the path. Nows your chance. You watch
the remaining solider and wait for him to turn his back. You slowly stand up and walk behind him. You grab his head, push it back so his
neck is exposed. You put your dagger up against the solider's neck and wait a few seconds. You look into the soldier's frightened eyes and smile
a sly smile. You press your dagger closer to the solider's neck.
You hear the sound of leaves moving, the other soldier was coming back. You quickly
run your dagger across the soldier's neck, causing blood to pour from the wound. You release the soldier as he falls to the ground, coughing. You
quickly run away from the scene and climb up a tall tree. Once at the top, you hear the voice of a man yelling in rage. You look back down to the
ground to see the other solider standing over the dying soldier. You smile once again and start to leap from tree to tree, towards the castle....
SarahDiamond
SarahDiamond
Your hiding in the bushes under a large oak tree. There are two soldiers a few feet away from you. Your mission: Assassinate the prince.
You need to get inside the castle. You were running along a path when you saw the two soldiers walking your way. You quickly get out of sight.
The two soldiers were told to guard this path. They stop walking and sit down on the path. They are very close to the bushes you are hiding in.
You hold your breath and slowly pull the hood of your jacket over your head.
You slowly take out your dagger and hold it close to your chest.
You can feel your heart pounding. One of the soldiers suddenly gets up and walks the other way down the path. Nows your chance. You watch
the remaining solider and wait for him to turn his back. You slowly stand up and walk behind him. You grab his head, push it back so his
neck is exposed. You put your dagger up against the solider's neck and wait a few seconds. You look into the soldier's frightened eyes and smile
a sly smile. You press your dagger closer to the solider's neck.
SarahDiamond
SarahDiamond
Tell me what you all think. Its not like the other one but, I need to know if you all like it or not:
Your hiding in the bushes under a large oak tree. There are two soldiers a few feet away from you. Your mission: Assassinate the prince.
You need to get inside the castle. You were running along a path when you saw the two soldiers walking your way. You quickly get out of sight.
The two soldiers were told to guard this path. They stop walking and sit down on the path. They are very close to the bushes you are hiding in.
You hold your breath and slowly pull the hood of your jacket over your head.
SarahDiamond
Tell me what you all think. Its not like the other one but, I need to know if you all like it or not: