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I would scream "YOU DON'T HAVE TO TAKE ME, IM GOTH!"

You feel something holding onto your leg. You sit up and
turn around to see a gray hand sticking up from the ground holding your ankle in a death grip. You punch at the hand, trying to get it to
let go of your ankle. The hand slowly starts to move underground, pulling your leg with it. You quickly claw at the grass, trying to save yourself.
The hand almost pulls you completely into the small hole. When something or someone grabs onto your hand that is still clawing at the grass.
You quickly get pulled out of the hole and you fall to the ground. A dark figure of a person kneels beside you as the ground starts to shake....

don't tell me your starting another story XD but I think it's really good, but maybe just a little more describing? unless you want it to be simple and tense.

A dark foggy meadow suddenly appears in front of you. You stand there in shock as transparent people rise from the ground and start
walking around the meadow. You feel a cold chill run down your spine as one of the monsters walk through you, like you are just thin air.
You start to panic and you look down at your hands. Your skin is turning a dark grayish color. You gasp and start to run away from the
meadow. You run for what feels like forever. You never find the gate that you had come from to enter the meadow. You come up to a tree
as you run. You start to run past the tree when you trip on something in the ground.

Imagine This: