Rivershadow Chapter 23
Posted on: May 29, 2015
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Can I have some feedback on what I could improve on or anything else?You don't have to comment-I just want to know what I should change :) ~Moonie
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Kenzel's POV: Everything turned black. I heard another roar, and screams. Smoke made it so I could barely breathe. Finally, the air cooled down and my breathing eased a little. I felt a smooth, sweet liquid slide into my mouth and, with great difficulty, I swallowed it, almost choking in the process. The pain slowly ebbed away, my breathing returned to normal, and my muscles relaxed. I opened my eyes and saw Qyliaea and Kaitlyn standing over me.
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Kenzel's POV:The pain was getting worse and worse, and now all I could see of Qyliaea and Kaitlyn were two black, blurred outlines. A roar almost broke my eardrums. I frantically tried to move, but couldn't. I was terrified. (Note to readers:Hey, I couldn't think up a name for the weird guy, so um yeh…say goodbye to him…) Blurry orange and red flames licked at the walls of the cottage. I felt myself being lifted up by Qyliaea or Kaitlyn, I couldn't tell which.
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Qyliaea's POV:He hurried toward Kenzel, not bothering to say a word. This man really is strange,I thought....GTG BE BACK SOON NOT STARTING A NEW CHAPTER
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Qyliaea's POV: The man started stirring the ingredients in his cauldron with a long, silver spoon. He grabbed a sparkling, clear vial and poured a sweet smelling blue liquid into it. I realized I was staring at him, and quickly averted my gaze and looked at Kenzel. She let out a weak cough. I looked back at the man. He had taken a small, long silver object and dipped it in a red liquid. He then put it into the vial and started to stir it. The potion turned purple and started to fizz.
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This might be a little late…:P
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