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Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Posted on: Apr 26, 2015
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Ok you waited and I gave you a crap story I'm sorry. So first one and if my followers don't like it I'm just gonna stop.
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Comments: 13

Blancwing
Valkyrien
9/10 I love it! <33333 You MUST write more. I am hooked already. :D
YAY!
Moonwatcher
Blancwing
Umm I think you wear blue, but I'll give you this since you're the first person to read and comment. You are one of the ppl down BUT you can still move and you are standing up with support form you sword but didn't charge YET because the blood was getting in you eyes. :p
I don't really care what color she wears, but I prefer it to be white because she's Greek :)
Valkyrien
Blancwing
Ok so that's the end of the chapter. Only followers are permitted to read this. Please rate this chapter out of 10. If you have any tips I'd be happy to listen.
9/10 I love it! <33333 You MUST write more. I am hooked already. :D
Blancwing
Moonwatcher
And..zat's LySUUUUUNNNAAAAAAA
Umm I think you wear blue, but I'll give you this since you're the first person to read and comment. You are one of the ppl down BUT you can still move and you are standing up with support form you sword but didn't charge YET because the blood was getting in you eyes. :p
Moonwatcher
Blancwing
know these ppl and it pained me to see them like this. As for me I was froze behind a rock, I couldn't move no matter how much I tried. There was a voice, it was kind and full of warmth. I turned my head there was a girl a bit older than I was, with long ebony hair, dragon wings, and a white and blue outfit. "Don't worry leave it to me, you've done enough for us." she said and then smiled. "I'll protect all of you" Then she charged the monster and I had a bad feeling. My voice also failed me.
And..zat's LySUUUUUNNNAAAAAAA
Blancwing
Moonwatcher
9/10! :DDD
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M NOT CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Moonwatcher
9/10! :DDD
Blancwing
Ok so that's the end of the chapter. Only followers are permitted to read this. Please rate this chapter out of 10. If you have any tips I'd be happy to listen.
Blancwing
me and said, "Come on today is the big day, we're leaving the village for the big city today." She saw my expression of pure terror and said, " What's wrong?" I told her about my dream. "Don't worry about it, it was just a dream." Maybe she was right, but why did I have a feeling it was so much more than a dream.
Blancwing
I wanted to shout to her to stop, but I couldn't, I felt like crying. When she charged it there was a huge explosion. I could feel the heat on my face. Then the dream blacked out and changed into a different one. A raspy voice spoke. " You a fighting for a losing cause." "Join us and help us destroy our enemies." This time I could speak and hear myself say, " I'll never help you." "THEN I WILL DEVOUR YOU!" The dream ended and I woke up in a cold sweat. It was morning and Adaline was in front of