story chapter one draft

Posted on: May 25, 2026
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hi
this is very very very very much a wip , i wrote like 14 chapters of this story about two years ago now, and in the past few months ive massively reworked things so now im starting over.

the things in brackets like this [ h e l l o ] are things im not decided on yet or figured werent good enough to put here, but i wanted to post something so

also, i edited some of this while on a call and trying to converse, so some of my english skills might not be on point...

but um yeah, um heres the link, i uh hope it works... or maybe not, ig we'll see https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qp11_uEhbCvXVDfpEXXJ0anS1CSyKtWiYbv6bjnmras/edit?usp=sharing

idk if it lets you edit it but if it does please dont.

the genre of the story is fantasy medieval i think also if that matters or if anyone sees this and cares










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Comments: 26

that’s not an answer sob
yes it is
if there is anything writing related i will find it
yeah, fair.
it’s not just you, definitely not.
though go i will say i don’t really go back and think my ideas were bad, it’s just that i think my execution was terrible.
imo, almost anything can be good in the hands of a good writer.
then there’s the fact anything too technical i worry will sound funny to other people when it isn’t meant to.
but it’s not just a you thing.

yeah
i think that you shouldn’t be forced into things if you don’t want to do them and they aren’t necessary. like if you’re starving someone should force you to eat.. but if it’s like an extracurricular or something someone wants you to do, they shouldn’t be allowed to make you
then again i guess going out of your comfort zone can be useful from time to time.
ah
there’s also the problem of, “oh, this idea sounds super cool in my head, I absolutely love where this is going. I can picture this and that happening, and overall this seems like the best thing I’ve ever come up with.”
and then it comes time to actually write it in your story
and it turns out absolutely nothing like how you envisioned it (and typically in my case, it ends up becoming trash).
maybe because it’s easier to picture things in your mind because you know what it’s supposed to look like and you don’t need to write down 5,000 words to describe everything in the scene.

definitely not, I agree
it all depends on context and the situation, and also how you personally feel about it. don’t be concerned with what someone else wants you to do.
sorry yall i feel like im intruding on this conversation here but-
glitch i genuinely thought you guys were having an argument or something at first because you keep using periods at the end of every sentence and i swear you never use them normally 💀
lol
i kinda change my comment style based on who i’m talking to and what about
yeah, fair.
it’s not just you, definitely not.
though go i will say i don’t really go back and think my ideas were bad, it’s just that i think my execution was terrible.
imo, almost anything can be good in the hands of a good writer.
then there’s the fact anything too technical i worry will sound funny to other people when it isn’t meant to.
but it’s not just a you thing.

yeah
i think that you shouldn’t be forced into things if you don’t want to do them and they aren’t necessary. like if you’re starving someone should force you to eat.. but if it’s like an extracurricular or something someone wants you to do, they shouldn’t be allowed to make you
then again i guess going out of your comfort zone can be useful from time to time.
sorry yall i feel like im intruding on this conversation here but-
glitch i genuinely thought you guys were having an argument or something at first because you keep using periods at the end of every sentence and i swear you never use them normally 💀
i didnt see this until just now

i just dont like the idea of other people reading my writing
like, do you ever go through those times where you think a concept seems like a good idea when you came up with it, and then you go through with it. but then later, could be months or even years later, you look back and wonder, “why did i ever think this was a good idea? this is terrible.”
and then something you once were considering sharing to people suddenly becomes this monstrosity, the worst thing you’ve ever laid eyes upon.
sorry for the rant, but is that just me?

ah
yeah i get that
its good not to rush into things
if youre not prepared, then no one, not even yourself, should pressure you into doing something you’re not ready for, or don’t feel the best about.
trial and error
yeah, fair.
it’s not just you, definitely not.
though go i will say i don’t really go back and think my ideas were bad, it’s just that i think my execution was terrible.
imo, almost anything can be good in the hands of a good writer.
then there’s the fact anything too technical i worry will sound funny to other people when it isn’t meant to.
but it’s not just a you thing.

yeah
i think that you shouldn’t be forced into things if you don’t want to do them and they aren’t necessary. like if you’re starving someone should force you to eat.. but if it’s like an extracurricular or something someone wants you to do, they shouldn’t be allowed to make you
then again i guess going out of your comfort zone can be useful from time to time.
i told you
i see all that goes on on this site

also
safety (link clicking) reasons
okay
i believe you
*cries*

mm, okay, np :\
safety first
how did YOUUU find this?????
are ALL YALL recently commented stalkers or something??????
also wait why not-
i told you
i see all that goes on on this site

also
safety (link clicking) reasons
oh npnp

ah yeah. get that.

mmm. okay. well, if you don’t want to, then you probably have good reasons

sort of. i /want/ to but then i can never follow through with anything so it’ll be a while before anything is near ready
i didnt see this until just now

i just dont like the idea of other people reading my writing
like, do you ever go through those times where you think a concept seems like a good idea when you came up with it, and then you go through with it. but then later, could be months or even years later, you look back and wonder, “why did i ever think this was a good idea? this is terrible.”
and then something you once were considering sharing to people suddenly becomes this monstrosity, the worst thing you’ve ever laid eyes upon.
sorry for the rant, but is that just me?

ah
yeah i get that
its good not to rush into things
if youre not prepared, then no one, not even yourself, should pressure you into doing something you’re not ready for, or don’t feel the best about.
trial and error
i can't read the story but i'm sure its peak :>
how did YOUUU find this?????
are ALL YALL recently commented stalkers or something??????
also wait why not-
that’s not an answer sob