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Hello. I am Don. Er...to put it simply, my species--the Takanaru--we all have...clones on each planet of the solar system, although sadly three have been destroyed by the hand of evil. I have tried to act tough about it around my friends, but one of those planets was where I was born. At night, I sob into my pillow hoping and hoping that my parents and sister are still alive by some miracle, though I know deep down it couldn't be true. I was there; I watched it explode. I hate being invincible. It makes me even more vulnerable than you'd think.

It's cold and dank on Mars. I'm shivering, teeth chattering, curled up in my blankets when I hear a loud CRASH! My head shoots up and I begin to panic. It's usually so quiet here; nothing except me and my crushed soul residing in my tiny hut made of red rocks. I whirl around, searching for some clue of what the noise could've been. I abruptly stop as I sense a presence behind me. I very gingerly, very slowly turn around, throwing the blankets off of me. And I'm staring into a striking pair of glowing swamp green eyes.

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Comments: 6

This is amazing! Thanks so much for the entry.
Tyy and np <3 it was fun :D
This is amazing! Thanks so much for the entry.
oh yeah that purple thing on his head is a mohawk loll
You may comment now :>
(btw sorry for the delay my internet wasn't working and then I had to eat lol)
second btw I might continue this story bcuz its hard to make a really short story.-.
She mumbles something unintelligible under her breath, then says, "I don't know."

"What do you mean? Everyone knows their own name; it's how they're referred to!" I exclaim.

She just stares at me blankly.

I sigh. "I guess I'll have to take you to Xeanor. He'll know what to do, for sure." I pause. "The problem is...he lives on Venus. I haven't used my spaceship in God knows how long--it may not work the same anymore." I pace across the room for a while, and suddenly it hits me. "Follow me."
(this is all translated to english from Takanarian in case ur wondering why they're speaking english lol)

"Wha...," I say, lost for words. I look her up and down in awe. Suddenly I snap back to the current situation and regain my strength to speak. "Who are you?" I ask, the obvious first query.

She's panting, and she seems to also be contemplating the inside of my little hut. I feel my cheeks turn the color of cherries. "How...did I get here?" she answered with another question.

"You tell me," I say.

"But I can't, because I literally don't know," she replied. "And...who am I? Who are you? What is this place?"

"This is my home...an empty wasteland, in case you couldn't tell before," I say. I decide to tell her my name. She seems too innocent to be harmful. "I'm Don. What's your name?"