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Posted on: Jul 16, 2020
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This is a CE, so it needs to be GOOD. (hope now it's not too long, I rewrote in word document so...)
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Comments: 21

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JFeather
Oof. Welp its a really good story anyways! :)
:D
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Kaladoshal
oof some of the elipses didn't end up showing up when I copy and pasted it from word. :
Oof. Welp its a really good story anyways! :)
Kaladoshal
JFeather
Good job! I really like the edits and added details, although I personally liked some of the ellipses in the first one. Great job! Thanks for joining :)
oof some of the elipses didn't end up showing up when I copy and pasted it from word. :
JFeather
Good job! I really like the edits and added details, although I personally liked some of the ellipses in the first one. Great job! Thanks for joining :)
Kaladoshal
That concludes it. :D Hope this is a little better!
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If the others wont listen, the best I can do is to prepare my own pack for when she returns, he thought. I just hope the others will come to their senses and do the same.
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Frostguard watched as slowly each of the alphas walked away from the flat stone that served as their table, and into the beacons that would lead them back home. Eventually, he too walked back to his beacon and watched as the light surrounded him, finally engulfing him and leading him back to the Jagged Peaks, home of the Frost wolves.
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''I feel that the Frost wolves, being one of the oldest species in Luneria, might be able to feel magic that some,'' he glanced in the direction of Fathom, ''might not.''
''Our power and knowledge of magic is no less than yours,'' Azure said shortly. ''I think on that note, we can conclude our meeting.''
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''And what evidence to you have to prove that?'' Everyone turned toward Azure, who had not spoken all evening. He was the alpha of the Hurricane tribe, belonging to the Aether species.
''Something iswrong. Every time I go out at night, I feel like something iswatching. Like something is in control. It isnt safe, Im telling you''
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''Nobody saw her get killed, nobody was there when it happened! All we saw was Chill and Tide, walking towards the battle. All we saw was the Hunters retreating. But we never saw her killed. And her body was never found. What if'' he paused and decided to speak his theory, ''She was never killed?''