Abandoned - Contest Entry

Posted on: Jun 22, 2020
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Edward pushed through the brambles and thorns with his ally close behind him. They had to find the Everstone if they were to win this, er- battle. ' ' Edward, I'm not sure where you're going, but I don't think it's this way, ' ' a cat, his ally, called from behind. ' ' I'm not trying to find a specific spot, unless maybe YOU know where the Everstone is. ' ' He muttered, his long black spotted tail swayed. These cats could walk on their hind legs, and speak the common language of which most of the hind legged-walking animals used to speak with each other. The other cat nodded, ' ' I do: it's not here. ' ' Edward grumbled and continued on. Soon after awhile, he realized that she was not following. ' ' Sprinkles? ' ' He called out. He heard a faint cry of his name, then dropped on all fours and pelted towards the sound. He skidded to a halt when he saw Sprinkles perched on a wall, her orange tabby fur bristling. Edward leapt up, ' ' What? ' ' Sprinkles glanced at him, ' ' Look. ' '

-Amy
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Comments: 5

Sorry, JFeather, I just can't get myself to do it. I hope that's okay. Basically what happens next is they find an abandoned town with creepy black eyed guys working there who look like their not present.
That's okay. Thanks for entering. :)
I think it'll be great if you continued the scene. It'll make an interesting story!
Sorry, JFeather, I just can't get myself to do it. I hope that's okay. Basically what happens next is they find an abandoned town with creepy black eyed guys working there who look like their not present.
I think it'll be great if you continued the scene. It'll make an interesting story!
Great story! Love the excellent vocab and description! I'm not used to the 3rd person omniscient but it's great to see a unique writing style. Thanks for joining!
Contest link: https://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/14648209/writer-s-block--*contest*/

Tell me if you want me to continue this scene.