Hostage - Chapter 1

Hostage - Chapter 1

Posted on: Apr 17, 2020
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Well, some asked for it, so here it is. Not all is complete yet, so I'll be posting little by little.
-!-Warning - This story has violence & death, if you are sensitive to this topic I advise not reading. -!-

Hostage- We were all sitting there. Blindfolded, tied into the chairs by tough, thick ropes. I couldnt make out any form of light, so the lights must not have been turned on. Suddenly, the atmosphere seemed brighter. Maybe the lights were turned on? But how.. all of us were blindfolded. Then, we heard a voice speak, I see, most of you were able to tell I turned the lights on. Well, I believe so, anyways. Do any of you even know why I brought you here? I dont believe so. Nor do I believe any of you are brave enough to speak up. I think I should explain why I am holding you.. well, holding you hostage.. It sounded like a young man. I wanted to know why he took me and the others.. why he stopped talking.. I just was so curious..

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Hostage - Chapter 1

Posted on: Apr 17, 2020
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Well, some asked for it, so here it is. Not all is complete yet, so I'll be posting little by little.
-!-Warning - This story has violence & death, if you are sensitive to this topic I advise not reading. -!-

Hostage- We were all sitting there. Blindfolded, tied into the chairs by tough, thick ropes. I couldnt make out any form of light, so the lights must not have been turned on. Suddenly, the atmosphere seemed brighter. Maybe the lights were turned on? But how.. all of us were blindfolded. Then, we heard a voice speak, I see, most of you were able to tell I turned the lights on. Well, I believe so, anyways. Do any of you even know why I brought you here? I dont believe so. Nor do I believe any of you are brave enough to speak up. I think I should explain why I am holding you.. well, holding you hostage.. It sounded like a young man. I wanted to know why he took me and the others.. why he stopped talking.. I just was so curious..

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oooo i wanna hear more!
very deep?!!
Oh, I did use speach marks, but they were copy and pasted and when you try o put them in the skindex for me it just erases them. I can try using the apostrophe twice next time.
Also, I'll probably fix the intercom part up. Thanks for the tips!
Yeah, quotation marks don't work period, and google docs fonts for apostrophes are different than on skindex, so quite frankly, you have to replace them either way xD

I don't know if you use Google Docs, though. xP
I'm gonna stick this on my front page- this was so good!
put a msg on my profile when the next part comes out
.0. I wanna hear more! It might've been easier to read if you used speech marks to show when people are speaking. Also, maybe you can reword the intercom part because if you're blindfolded you wouldn't really be able to tell that there is an intercom I'd think. Maybe say something like the protagonist can hear a sound echoing through the environment/room?
Oh, I did use speach marks, but they were copy and pasted and when you try o put them in the skindex for me it just erases them. I can try using the apostrophe twice next time.
Also, I'll probably fix the intercom part up. Thanks for the tips!
Update me when next comes out please!
That's all I have written so far, hope you enjoy!

If you have anything helpful for me, or if I made a grammar or spelling error, that'd be great if you told me!
.0. I wanna hear more! It might've been easier to read if you used speech marks to show when people are speaking. Also, maybe you can reword the intercom part because if you're blindfolded you wouldn't really be able to tell that there is an intercom I'd think. Maybe say something like the protagonist can hear a sound echoing through the environment/room?
That's all I have written so far, hope you enjoy!

If you have anything helpful for me, or if I made a grammar or spelling error, that'd be great if you told me!
- hear this, You all are ready and set. Your trials will begin. Take you blindfold and ropes off, thats all you need to do for now. If you do not complete this task in a mere 30 minutes, you will be executed.