chapter-1 (detective)

I've desisted to make a book like everyone else is doing lol o.o ...

It was a cold rainy day of 1954 January the 1st, I was walking down the street thinking about what I was going to do too finish this case.. But this case was the hardest of them all and I needed a break.. Then I saw a restaurant
I wanted too go inside of it but I was too cold and wet because I have no umbrella.. :l But I got a shock of spirit in me and I went in. Wen I walked in Everyone looked at me like I was a total werido
But i did not look at them and I walked too my table feeling really awful. After ordering some lunch I felt on my toes again. Then out of nowhere I hear a scream and a crash so I look
out the window and I saw a child running down the street with a hand full of something.... and then I look harder and I see a lady saying COME BACK here young man! Then I ran out I asked her what did he take? She said he took my........

TO BE continued! <3