the fruit dicussion. - writing activity

the fruit dicussion. - writing activity

Posted on: Apr 10, 2024
About 1 month ago
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this took FOREVER-

pinaple: im clearly the best
apple: no me! im so great doctors are scared of me!!
bannana: no me!! i have my own bread type!!
orange: quiet down before 'she' gets here.
watermelon: yea!
strawberry: *rolls eyes*
melon: what about me?
all: NO!
melon: :(
grape: *walks in* its obvious who's the best.
all: YES GRAPE MA'AM YOU ARE MA'AM
grape: okay, now lets go get lunch :)
melon: Yay :D
grape: not you.
melon: :(

promt: a fruit council meets to decide which is the best fruit
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the fruit dicussion. - writing activity

Posted on: Apr 10, 2024
About 1 month ago
136
6
0
this took FOREVER-

pinaple: im clearly the best
apple: no me! im so great doctors are scared of me!!
bannana: no me!! i have my own bread type!!
orange: quiet down before 'she' gets here.
watermelon: yea!
strawberry: *rolls eyes*
melon: what about me?
all: NO!
melon: :(
grape: *walks in* its obvious who's the best.
all: YES GRAPE MA'AM YOU ARE MA'AM
grape: okay, now lets go get lunch :)
melon: Yay :D
grape: not you.
melon: :(

promt: a fruit council meets to decide which is the best fruit
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ITS NOT -.-
YRS IT IS
ITS NOT -.-
Hi, I'm late but my job as the writing master is to help. (please don't take any of this the wrong way. I'll try to be nice. Sorry, I'm just very serious about writing :')

Okay so, your writing is not really "writing." Let me be clear, it's not quite TELLING a story. There's no action, no movement, just talking. It's like a podcast (cuz podcasts are only talking)
This story is only talking, not action or emotion really. You NEED to describe stuff, what a character is doing, feeling, what's happening in the scene. But tbh I, myself, wouldn't know how to write this prompt. My advice, if you have YT search up some writing videos, watch em, learn from it.
But hey hey good job anyway!! <34
-slaps- is not 0.0
knuckles disagrees with you
I LIKE CHERRY THE FRUIT SO YOU ARE ON THE LIST FOR SAYING THEY SUCK
THERE OKAY I JUST DONT LOVE THEM-


I do like the ones without the seed in the middle, those are gud
UHM


WHAT?


IM NAMED OFF OF THE TREE NOT THE FRUIT- CHERRY BLOSSOM IS A TREE O_O
I LIKE CHERRY THE FRUIT SO YOU ARE ON THE LIST FOR SAYING THEY SUCK
-slaps- is not 0.0
Yes it it
??what did you just say???

*grabs a list and puts you on it* welcome to the list, I look forward to crossing your name off it

Tunic: RUN WHIRL YOU CAN!
UHM


WHAT?


IM NAMED OFF OF THE TREE NOT THE FRUIT- CHERRY BLOSSOM IS A TREE O_O
??what did you just say???

*grabs a list and puts you on it* welcome to the list, I look forward to crossing your name off it

Tunic: RUN WHIRL YOU CAN!
ERMMMM
*barf* I MAY BE NAMED CHERRY BUT I DESPISE THEM
??what did you just say???

*grabs a list and puts you on it* welcome to the list, I look forward to crossing your name off it

Tunic: RUN WHIRL YOU CAN!