Awe, thanks so much :D

Exciting! Having an interesting plot that really pulls the reader in is hard for some people (me lol) but I think you’ve got that down :D

yayyy lol x3

AAAH
I have found my people hehe

Anyway, I'm gonna leave you guys on this minor cliffhanger. Tell me, what do you think?

However, will this work?

This leaves one teen, who is determined to stop The Teller (the one writing everyone's future). The teen discovers that when she holds her breath, The Teller can't find her. So she uses this technique to her advantage, and while she holds her breath, she grabs a pointed stone and begins to scratch into the paper to get rid of The Teller and ensure that the future is how it is supposed to be.

This leaves three teens. They don't try to escape, neither do they make any sudden movements. But one of
the three get possessed by someone who claims to be named The Teller, and while the teen is possessed, he chokes one of the two others to death before he is back to normal, which is when he collapses, hitting his head on a rock and entering a coma.

The words say that the angry one will die, and so the angry one does fall to the ground, no longer breathing. This leaves the group down to four grieving teens, and one of which cowers away. The book erases what was previously there and starts writing more words, which says that the coward would be forced to labour in a foreign country for the rest of his life. And so the coward does run away, having not seen the new words in the book, and he gets taken away by bulky men who threaten to kill him if he doesn't listen to them.

A group of teens go exploring in a historical cave, and find a secret passageway which hasn't been opened recently. Being their adventurous selves, the went through the passageway and it led to a book, pages wide open. One of the teens gets angry and throws the book at the ground, before the group see words appearing on the book.