Blank Stare - Prologue

Blank Stare - Prologue

Posted on: Sep 18, 2019
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm making a story here! It'll be in the comments. Don't comment until I write 'MarsmallowDreams' (It'll be my user once I can change it). I'm open to critques and suggestions to make the story better. I wanna be an author someday, so I'm open to any constructive criticism!
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Blank Stare - Prologue

Posted on: Sep 18, 2019
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I'm making a story here! It'll be in the comments. Don't comment until I write 'MarsmallowDreams' (It'll be my user once I can change it). I'm open to critques and suggestions to make the story better. I wanna be an author someday, so I'm open to any constructive criticism!
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use I'm pushed out an entrance, and light stings my eyes. I marvel at the world around me. There are nymphs and elves walking about, fairies are dancing around the square, there's a cyclops is running a flower shop. Am I dead? Is this fairy tale heaven? The glowy orb pushes me into a hospital-like building, and a woman with droopy eyes and blue skin (probably a type of demon) behind the front desk looks at me. ? What did she just say? I can't hear her.
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To be honest, that would explain the caked blood on my face. I'm in so much pain, but I don't feel any tears or any emotion at all. Who am I?
I brush my shaggy hair out of my eyes, and suddenly a small globe of light appears in front of me. It seems to be communicating with me. Telling me to follow it. I shake my head, telling it that I can't, my leg is busted. It goes behind me, and pushes me up. Pushing me forward. I'm confused. What is going on?
I must have been in a cave or something, beca
use I'm pushed out an entrance, and light stings my eyes. I marvel at the world around me. There are nymphs and elves walking about, fairies are dancing around the square, there's a cyclops is running a flower shop. Am I dead? Is this fairy tale heaven? The glowy orb pushes me into a hospital-like building, and a woman with droopy eyes and blue skin (probably a type of demon) behind the front desk looks at me. ? What did she just say? I can't hear her.
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(Okay, so there was a delay because I'm forgetful, but here you go!)
I wake up, there's sand in my eyes.
Where am I?
I stand up, and nearly fall over. I must have broken something. It's dark, I can barely see. Though that might be the sand. My head is pounding. Am I hungover? How'd I end up here?
I sit back down, not wanting to put extra pressure on my damaged leg. I try to think clearly, but all I can manage to think is that I'm gonna die. I can't even remember my name. Do I have amnesia?
To be honest, that would explain the caked blood on my face. I'm in so much pain, but I don't feel any tears or any emotion at all. Who am I?
I brush my shaggy hair out of my eyes, and suddenly a small globe of light appears in front of me. It seems to be communicating with me. Telling me to follow it. I shake my head, telling it that I can't, my leg is busted. It goes behind me, and pushes me up. Pushing me forward. I'm confused. What is going on?
I must have been in a cave or something, beca
(Okay, so there was a delay because I'm forgetful, but here you go!)
I wake up, there's sand in my eyes.
Where am I?
I stand up, and nearly fall over. I must have broken something. It's dark, I can barely see. Though that might be the sand. My head is pounding. Am I hungover? How'd I end up here?
I sit back down, not wanting to put extra pressure on my damaged leg. I try to think clearly, but all I can manage to think is that I'm gonna die. I can't even remember my name. Do I have amnesia?
(I'll start the story tomorrow, sorry!)